六級高分作文_如何面對錯誤?

　如何面對錯誤?

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on facing mistakes properly by commenting on the remark, “You can learn great things from your mistakes when you aren’t busy denying them .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

審題立意

1. 導語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)題目的要求，從評論“當你不急于否認錯誤時，就會從錯誤中學到好東西”入手，就“如何正確面對錯誤”這一話題進行論述。

2. 文章立意：人無完人，任何人都會犯錯誤。人們對待錯誤的方式不盡相同，應正確對待錯誤。

寫作思路

1. 第一段簡要解釋諺語的含義并提出問題：應如何正確面對錯誤？

2. 第二段用列舉法論證，正確對待錯誤首先要承認錯誤：不要怨天尤人，也不要自怨自艾；承認錯誤就是掃清前進道路上的障礙，知道錯誤在哪，便于更好地糾正錯誤，爭取成功。

3. 第三段從另一方面論證如何正確對待錯誤：向?qū)＜艺埥?，獲取寶貴建議。

參考范文

“You can learn great things from your mistakes when you aren’t busy denying them.” It’s true that to err is human. If we don’t deny mistakes, we can learn a lot from them. 1 However, many people are afraid of mistakes. How can we face mistakes properly? 2

The first step 3 is acknowledging the mistake that you have made.Admit that you have done something wrong rather than blame everyone and everything but yourself for a setback. Of course, you don’t need to condemn yourself as a failure. Understanding your mistake is to clear your way to progress because you can learn some lessons from the mistake. Acknowledging your mistake is to reflect on how you made the mistake so as to make it more likely for you to correct yourself and succeed the next time.

Another way 3 to face your mistakes properly is to ask for advice from an expert who is wise, trustworthy, and willing to listen to your explanations of what you’ve tried so far. If you have all ears to the advice, you’ll gain many valuable insights.

“當你不急于否認錯誤時，就會從錯誤中學到好東西?！钡拇_，人非圣賢，孰能無過。如果我們不否認錯誤，我們就會從中學到很多。然而，很多人害怕錯誤。如何正確面對錯誤呢？

第一步就是承認你所犯的錯誤。寧可承認你做錯了也不要怨天尤人。當然，你也不用責備自己是個失敗者。認識錯誤能為你掃清進步道路上的障礙，因為你可以從錯誤中吸取教訓。承認錯誤就是要反思你是如何犯下錯誤的，以便你更有可能調(diào)整自己并在下次取得成功。

另一種正確面對錯誤的方法就是向睿智且值得信賴的專家請教，這位專家愿意聽你解釋到目前為止你已經(jīng)付出了哪些努力。如果你對這些忠告洗耳恭聽，你會獲得很多有價值的深刻見解。

范文點評

1. 開篇引入引言并簡要評述。

2. 話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，指出許多人害怕錯誤，然后自然過渡，用疑問句的方式引出本文要探討的問題：如何正確面對錯誤。

3. 分層論證，從兩個方面論證正確面對錯誤的方式。

要點用法

To err is human. 人非圣賢，孰能無過

blame everyone and everything but oneself 怨天尤人

condemn v. 譴責

clear one’s way 掃清某人的道路

reflect on 反??；深思

trustworthy adj. 可靠的；可信賴的

have all ears 洗耳恭聽

insight n. 深刻見解；洞察力

句法點評

1. Understanding your mistake is to clear your way to progress because you can learn some lessons from the mistake.

本句是復雜句，包含了because引導的原因狀語從句。除此之外，本句還用到了動名詞，在句中作主語，使句式變化多樣。

2. Another way to face your mistakes properly is to ask for advice from an expert who is wise, trustworthy, and willing to listen to your explanations of what you’ve tried so far.

本句也是復雜句，包含了who引導的定語從句who is wise, trustworthy...so far，該定語從句中使用了what引導的賓語從句，作介詞of的賓語，使得句式結(jié)構(gòu)變化多樣，行文流暢。