英語六級命題作文：網絡活動
- 經典范文
- 結構剖析
- 參考譯文
- 亮點詞匯
- 重點句背誦與仿寫
Activities on Internet
The above table depicts a clear map of Internet application during the past two years. It's easy to find that online music, online news and search engine still rank the top three among all the online activities.
Making a general survey of the chart, there is a distinct change which deserves your attention, that is, commercial transaction on the network rockets up between 2012 and 2013 and its growth rates rank from top one to top five, especially for the online payment, hotel booking and online stocks transaction because doing business on Internet is more convenient and efficient, and thus some network stations like taobao thrives. In contrast with the fast increase of the online commercial application, the traditional activities on Internet such as instant messages and online videos develop with a comparatively slow speed.
In line with my analysis, the application on the network is opt to be more commercial while the conventional usage on Internet like searching information and communication will develop in a stable speed. In a word, Internet will be commerce-oriented and recreation-oriented in the future. (183 words)
結構剖析
文章分為三段
文章第一段概述了上表所示的主要信息，即網絡音樂、網絡新聞和搜索引擎。
第二段總結了過去兩年中互聯(lián)網應用的主要變化。首先，互聯(lián)網商務交易的應用方面增長很快。其次，互聯(lián)網傳統(tǒng)的應用模式則發(fā)展較慢。
第三段總結了作者對于對于互聯(lián)網應用的發(fā)展方向判斷，互聯(lián)網的商務應用將會進一步發(fā)展。
網絡活動
上表是一張有關過去兩年的互聯(lián)網應用的清晰圖表。顯而易見，在所有的網上活動中，在線音樂，網絡新聞和搜索引擎仍然排在前三名。
對圖表做個大概的調查，你會注意到有一個明顯的改變，那就是2012年至2013年網上的商務交易激增，它的增長率排名占據(jù)了前五位。尤其是網上付款，酒店預訂和在線的股票交易，因為在網上做生意更加便捷和有效。因此一些網站，如淘寶網，也蓬勃發(fā)展起來了。相比于網上商業(yè)應用的快速增長，傳統(tǒng)的網絡活動發(fā)展速度相對緩慢，如即時消息和在線視頻。
根據(jù)我的分析，網絡應用更傾向于商業(yè)化了，而對網絡傳統(tǒng)的使用，例如搜索信息和溝通，會以穩(wěn)定的速度發(fā)展?？傊?，未來互聯(lián)網將會以商業(yè)和娛樂為主。
search engine 搜索引擎
make a general survey of 縱觀
rocket up 快速增長
rank n. 等級，階層，排，列 v. 分等級，排列，列為
booking n. 預約
thrive v. 蓬勃發(fā)展，繁榮，茁壯成長
instant message 即時消息
online video 網絡視頻
in line with 根據(jù)
stable adj. 穩(wěn)定的，可靠的
1. The above table depicts a clear map of Internet application during the past two years. 上表是一張有關過去兩年的互聯(lián)網應用的清晰圖表。
2. In contrast with the fast increase of the online commercial application, the traditional activities on Internet such as instant messages and online videos develop with a comparatively slow speed. 相比于網上商業(yè)應用的快速增長，傳統(tǒng)的網絡活動發(fā)展速度相對緩慢，如即時消息和在線視頻。
3. In line with my analysis, the application on the network is opt to be more commercial while the conventional usage on Internet like searching information and communication will develop in a stable speed. 根據(jù)我的分析，網絡應用更傾向于商業(yè)化了，而對網絡傳統(tǒng)的使用，例如搜索信息和溝通，會以穩(wěn)定的速度發(fā)展。
