Is It Necessary to Attend Training Classes?
According to the graph, great changes have taken place in the number of training classes in the past twenty years. On the one hand, in the last century, the increase of the training classes was not so great. On the other hand, there has been a sharp increase in the training classes after 2008.
There are three reasons for the change. Firstly, with the development of the society, more people pay much attention to the improvement of their ability, and they hope to improve through special training classes. Secondly, to most people, training plays a direct part in helping them to attain their goal quickly and efficiently. Thirdly, with the improvement of the people's living standards, more and more people regard it as a preferable way to spend their spare time.
As for me, it is necessary to attend training classes. For one thing, they can play a very important role in helping you to attain your goal quickly and efficiently. For another, you can learn not only what you need quickly but also a new way to broaden your horizon. (181 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為三段
第一段According to the graph根據(jù)圖表，指出培訓(xùn)班兩個(gè)方面的變化。
第二段分別以Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly分析了產(chǎn)生這種變化的幾個(gè)原因。
第三段As for me表明作者個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)，以For one thing，F(xiàn)or another開(kāi)頭說(shuō)明了作者個(gè)人認(rèn)為的參加培訓(xùn)班的好處。
是否有必要參加培訓(xùn)班？
由圖表可知，培訓(xùn)班的數(shù)量在過(guò)去二十年中有了翻天覆地的變化：其一，上個(gè)世紀(jì)培訓(xùn)班數(shù)量的增長(zhǎng)并不顯著；其二，2008年后培訓(xùn)班數(shù)量急劇增加。
這種變化是由三大原因引起的。首先，隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的人注重自身能力的培養(yǎng)，他們希望通過(guò)特殊培訓(xùn)班來(lái)提高水平。其次，對(duì)于大部分人而言，培訓(xùn)班能快速、有效地幫助他們達(dá)到目標(biāo)。第三，隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來(lái)越多的人將參加培訓(xùn)班視為打發(fā)業(yè)余時(shí)間的最佳途徑。
對(duì)我而言，參加培訓(xùn)班是十分必要的。一方面，它們?cè)谀憧焖儆行У貙?shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)的過(guò)程中起著至關(guān)重要的作用，另一方面，你不僅能迅速掌握所需技能，而且也能學(xué)到一種開(kāi)拓眼界的新方式。
according to... 根據(jù)......
take place 發(fā)生
on the one/other hand 一方面/另一方面
improvement n. 提高
attain their goal 達(dá)到他們的目的
regard...as 把......當(dāng)作
as for me 對(duì)于我來(lái)說(shuō)
not only...but also 不僅......而且
broaden your horizon 開(kāi)闊你的視野
1. Firstly, with the development of the society, more people pay much attention to the improvement of their ability, and they hope to improve through special training classes. 首先，隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的人注重自身能力的培養(yǎng)，他們希望通過(guò)特殊培訓(xùn)班來(lái)提高水平。
2. Secondly, to most people, training plays a direct part in helping them to attain their goal quickly and efficiently. 其次，對(duì)于大部分人而言，培訓(xùn)班能快速、有效地幫助他們達(dá)到目標(biāo)。
