英語六級命題作文：網(wǎng)上購物的優(yōu)越性及挑戰(zhàn)
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- 重點(diǎn)句背誦與仿寫
Benefits and Challenges of Online Shopping
With the popularity of Internet, more and more people are inclined to choose online shopping. Not only could people select their favorite commodities such as clothes, food, cell phones through the Internet, but also they could enjoy some services of remote learning, online payment, online booking and so on.
Online shopping has its particular advantages which are hardly found in the traditional shopping. For on thing, it is a desirable way to save much time for shopping. People needn't spend a whole daytime to lounge from one store to another for their shopping, however, what they have to do is just to browse the laptop with a cup of coffee and click softly for their goods. For another, online commodities tend to be cheaper than their counterparts because the cost of online store is usually lower than a conventional one. But online shopping also confronts many new challenges which include the inconvenience of remote transaction, lack of effective supervision and the risk of virtual platform.
I believe that online shopping will appeal to more consumers in the near future, though it is still far from perfection and satisfaction now. All the challenges it faces will be the best motive for its advancement. (199 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為三段
文章第一段說明隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的普及，越來越多的人選擇網(wǎng)上購物。而網(wǎng)上購物的形式也日益豐富。
第二段具體論述了網(wǎng)上購物的好處和所面對的挑戰(zhàn)。網(wǎng)上購物的優(yōu)勢是可以節(jié)省購物時(shí)間，同時(shí)購物成本也較便宜。而遠(yuǎn)程交易的不便，缺乏有效的監(jiān)督和虛擬平臺的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)正是網(wǎng)上購物所面對的挑戰(zhàn)。
第三段說明作者的觀點(diǎn)。作者認(rèn)為網(wǎng)上購物在不久的將來會更受歡迎的。它所面臨的挑戰(zhàn)也恰是其不斷改進(jìn)的動力。
網(wǎng)上購物的優(yōu)越性及挑戰(zhàn)
隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的普及，越來越多的人傾向于選擇網(wǎng)上購物。人們不僅可以通過互聯(lián)網(wǎng)選擇他們最喜歡的商品，如服裝、食品、手機(jī)，而且他們還可以享受一些服務(wù)，如遠(yuǎn)程教學(xué)、網(wǎng)上支付、網(wǎng)上訂票等。
網(wǎng)上購物有很多傳統(tǒng)購物難以相比的獨(dú)特優(yōu)勢。一方面，這是一個(gè)能節(jié)省大量時(shí)間的理想的購物方式。人們不必花一整個(gè)白天為了購物而一個(gè)一個(gè)商店地去閑逛，相反，他們所要做的只是端著一杯咖啡瀏覽一下電腦，然后輕輕點(diǎn)擊一下他們的商品。另一方面，網(wǎng)上商品往往比同類產(chǎn)品便宜，因?yàn)榫W(wǎng)上商店的成本通常比傳統(tǒng)商店要低。但網(wǎng)上購物也面臨著很多新的挑戰(zhàn)，這其中包括遠(yuǎn)程交易的不便利，缺乏有效的監(jiān)管以及虛擬平臺的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。
我認(rèn)為，雖然網(wǎng)上購物現(xiàn)在還遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠完善和令人滿意，但在不久的將來它將會吸引更多的消費(fèi)者。所有它所面臨的挑戰(zhàn)將是其發(fā)展的最佳動機(jī)。
be inclined to 傾向于
commodity n. 商品，日用品
laptop n. 便攜式電腦
counterpart n. 相似之物，副本
transaction n. 交易
virtual adj. 虛擬的
appeal to 呼吁，懇求
motive n. 動機(jī)
1. With the popularity of Internet, more and more people are inclined to choose online shopping. 隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的普及，越來越多的人傾向于選擇網(wǎng)上購物。
2. Online shopping has its particular advantages which are hardly found in the traditional shopping. 網(wǎng)上購物有很多傳統(tǒng)購物難以相比的獨(dú)特優(yōu)勢。
