University Study and Mountain Climbing
Nowadays some people like to compare university study to mountain climbing-an activity that requires painstaking, persistent efforts and strong will if one expects to make it a success. In my opinion, university study and mountain climbing indeed have some similarities.
Firstly, both university study and mountain climbing require painstaking efforts. A student has many things to learn and will sure encounter lots of difficulties in the road of study; while a mountaineer will also face many difficulties before he or she reaches the peak of a mountain. Secondly, university study and mountain climbing require persistence. A university student should learn to accumulate knowledge for his or her ultimate exam, while a mountaineer should also learn to preserve energy for the ultimate challenge. Thirdly, a sustainable willpower is needed in both university study and mountain climbing. With many difficulties and frustrations around, a student or a mountaineer should face them with strong will.
Generally speaking, mountain climbing is not an easy thing, nor is university study. Though university study and mountain climbing are quite different, they actually have many things in common. Through the above analysis, we could conclude that dreams can only be achieved by painstaking efforts and strong will. (198 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為三段
第一段引出論點(diǎn)：學(xué)習(xí)和登山確實(shí)有很多相似之處。
第二段提出三個(gè)分論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行論證：第一個(gè)分論點(diǎn)指出學(xué)習(xí)和登山一樣需要付出艱苦的努力;第二個(gè)分論點(diǎn)指出大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)和登山一樣需要不斷的努力;第三個(gè)分論點(diǎn)指出大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)和登山一樣需要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志做依靠。
最后一段總體概括并強(qiáng)調(diào)論點(diǎn)：登山不容易，大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)也很不容易，但夢(mèng)想的實(shí)現(xiàn)是靠著堅(jiān)持不懈的努力和強(qiáng)壯的意志達(dá)成的。
大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)和登山
現(xiàn)在有些人喜歡拿大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)和登山做比較，登山是一種需要下苦功、堅(jiān)持不懈的努力和堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志才能獲得成功的活動(dòng)。依我看來(lái)，大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)和登山確實(shí)有一些相似點(diǎn)。
第一，大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)和登山都需要勤懇的努力。學(xué)生有許多東西要學(xué)，而且在學(xué)習(xí)路上肯定會(huì)遇到許多困難;而一個(gè)攀登者在他或她到達(dá)頂峰之前，也會(huì)面臨很多困難。第二，大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)和登山需要堅(jiān)持不懈。一個(gè)大學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)為他(她)的期末考試積累知識(shí)，而一個(gè)攀登者也應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)為其最終挑戰(zhàn)積蓄能量。第三，大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)和登山都需要持續(xù)的意志力。周邊有許多困難和挫折，學(xué)生或攀登者應(yīng)該用堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志來(lái)對(duì)付它們。
一般說(shuō)來(lái)，登山不是件容易的事情，大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)也不是。雖然大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)和登山很不相同，但其實(shí)它們?cè)谠S多方面都有共同點(diǎn)。通過以上分析，我們可以得出結(jié)論：只有通過艱辛的努力和堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志，才能實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。
painstaking adj. 辛勤的，刻苦的
persistent adj. 持續(xù)的
similarity n. 相似，類似
encounter v. 遇到，遭遇
accumulate v. 堆積，積存
ultimate adj. 最后的，根本的
preserve v. 防護(hù)，維持
sustainable adj. 可持續(xù)的
frustration n. 挫折，沮喪
analysis n. 分析，分解
1. Nowadays some people like to compare university study to mountain climbing-an activity that requires painstaking, persistent efforts and strong will if one expects to make it a success. 現(xiàn)在有些人喜歡拿大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)和登山做比較，登山是一種需要下苦功、堅(jiān)持不懈的努力和堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志才能獲得成功的活動(dòng)。
2. A student has many things to learn and will sure encounter lots of difficulties in the road of study; while a mountaineer will also face many difficulties before he or she reaches the peak of a mountain. 學(xué)生有許多東西要學(xué)，而且在學(xué)習(xí)路上肯定會(huì)遇到許多困難;而一個(gè)攀登者在他或她到達(dá)頂峰之前，也會(huì)面臨很多困難。
3. With many difficulties and frustrations around, a student or a mountaineer should face them with strong will. 周邊有許多困難和挫折，學(xué)生或攀登者應(yīng)該用堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志來(lái)對(duì)付它們。
