英語六級命題作文：微笑拉近人與人之間的距離
- 經典范文
- 結構剖析
- 參考譯文
- 亮點詞匯
- 重點句背誦與仿寫
Smiles Shorten the Distance Between People
As the proverb puts it, a smile is the shortest distance between two people. In my opinion, a smile could bring people closer and we should smile as much as we can.
Firstly, a smile may help ease the tension in personal relationship. For example, when we make a mistake, a smile of our parents may remove our fears, what's more, give us the courage to amend and make progress. During the process, we become closer to our parents. Secondly, a smile may help break the ice between two strangers. For instance, when we fall down on the ground, we will be grateful if a stranger with a smile on his or her face gives a hand to us. We'll suddenly feel warm in the heart and feel the distance between the stranger and us is much shorter, and if we are lucky enough, we make a new friend.
To conclude, a smile could be an effective way to shorten the distance between people. Hence, it is advisable for people to smile more, not only to our beloved ones but also strangers. By doing so, we can build a more harmonious world and live a happier life. (198 words)
結構剖析
文章分為三段
第一段：首句引出諺語，接著簡單地談談對此諺語的個人看法。
第二段：從兩個方面舉例說明"微笑"如何拉近人與人之間的距離。
第三段：得出結論，指出"微笑"的確是拉近人與人之間距離的有效手段，最后呼吁大家多微笑。
微笑拉近人與人之間的距離
俗話說：微笑是兩個人之間最短的距離。在我看來，微笑可以拉近人與人之間的距離，我們應該盡可能地多微笑。
首先，微笑可以緩和緊張的人際關系。例如，當我們犯了錯，父母的一個微笑就可以消除我們的恐懼，并給予我們勇氣去改正錯誤并取得進步。在這個過程中，我們與父母變得更加親近。其次，微笑可以打破兩個陌生人之間的沉默。例如，當我們摔倒在地，我們會對那個伸手幫助我們的面帶微笑的陌生人充滿感激。我們會突然之間覺得內心很溫暖，也會覺得自己和陌生人之間的距離拉近了，而且如果我們夠幸運的話，我們又結交了一位新朋友。
總的來說，微笑是拉近人與人之間距離的一種很有效的方式。因此，多微笑，不只是對我們所愛的人，而且對陌生人，是十分可取的。如此一來，我們就能夠建設一個更加和諧的世界，生活得也更加幸福。
ease v. 減輕，緩和
tension n.關系緊張
remove v. 消除
amend v. 改正
break the ice 打破沉默
grateful adj. 感激的，感謝的
advisable adj. 明智的，可取的
beloved adj. 心愛的，摯愛的
harmonious adj. 和諧的
1. As the proverb puts it, a smile is the shortest distance between two people. 俗話說：微笑是兩個人之間最短的距離。
2. Firstly, a smile may help ease the tension in personal relationship. 首先，微笑可以緩和緊張的人際關系。
3. Secondly, a smile may help break the ice between two strangers. 其次，微笑可以打破兩個陌生人之間的沉默。
4. By doing so, we can build a more harmonious world and live a happier life. 如此一來，我們就能夠建設一個更加和諧的世界，生活得也更加幸福。
