Away from Net-bar Campaign
It has been reported that a middle school in Xuzhou City has recently launched a campaign named "Away from Net-bar". More than a thousand students have signed their solemn promise that they will not spend a single minute in net-bars. With the summer vacation drawing near, this campaign is especially meaningful for the development of the minors.
It cannot be denied that many net-bars are running illegally in some cities or towns, and even some are offering unhealthy programs that involve violence and sex. Besides, staying away from net-bars also does some good to students' physical health. By sitting too long in front of the computer screen, both their eyesight and physique suffer.
Although, to some extent, the Internet has brought people great convenience in getting information, entertainment and contact with others, especially for those businessmen. Nevertheless, for those youngsters, typically those teenagers who are not rational enough to control themselves, the Internet should not be allowed to intrude into their daily life and they should stay away from net-bars. (170 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為三段
第一段引出話題，概述徐州某中學(xué)1000多名學(xué)生簽名，莊嚴(yán)承諾"遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧"運(yùn)動(dòng)的情況。
第二段說(shuō)明"遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧"運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)于未成年人的重要意義，在說(shuō)完第一個(gè)意義之后用besides引出第二點(diǎn)意義。
第三段總結(jié)作者對(duì)于"遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧"運(yùn)動(dòng)的看法，首先說(shuō)明因特網(wǎng)給人們的生活帶來(lái)的好處，接著用nevertheless轉(zhuǎn)折，對(duì)于青少年來(lái)說(shuō)，要遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧。
"遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧"運(yùn)動(dòng)
據(jù)報(bào)道，最近徐州市的一所中學(xué)發(fā)起了一項(xiàng)名為"遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧"的運(yùn)動(dòng)。一千多名學(xué)生簽下了承諾書，保證不踏進(jìn)網(wǎng)吧。隨著暑假的臨近，此項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)未成年人而言尤其具有重大意義。
不可否認(rèn)的是，一些城鎮(zhèn)的許多網(wǎng)吧屬于非法經(jīng)營(yíng)，其中有些甚至還提供涉及暴力和色情的不健康內(nèi)容。此外，遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧也有利于學(xué)生們的身體健康。過(guò)久地坐在電腦屏幕前會(huì)影響他們的視力以及生理健康。
雖然，從某種程度而言，網(wǎng)絡(luò)在獲取信息、提供娛樂(lè)及人與人交流方面為人們大開方便之門，尤其對(duì)于那些商人;但對(duì)于年輕人而言，特別是那些不夠理智、尚無(wú)能力控制自己的青少年而言，應(yīng)禁止網(wǎng)絡(luò)侵?jǐn)_他們的日常生活，他們應(yīng)該遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧。
launch a campaign 發(fā)起一場(chǎng)運(yùn)動(dòng)
solemn adj. 莊嚴(yán)的
promise n. 承諾
draw near 臨近
minor n. 未成年人
illegally adv. 非法地
violence n. 暴力
to some extent 在某種程度上
convenience n. 便利
entertainment n. 娛樂(lè)
rational adj. 理性的
intrude into 干涉，干擾
1. It has been reported that a middle school in Xuzhou City has recently launched a campaign named "Away from Net-bar".
報(bào)道，最近徐州市的一所中學(xué)發(fā)起了一項(xiàng)名為"遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧"的運(yùn)動(dòng)。
2. With the summer vacation drawing near, this campaign is especially meaningful for the development of the minors. 隨著暑假的臨近，此項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)未成年人而言尤其具有重大意義。
3. By sitting too long in front of the computer screen, both their eyesight and physique suffer. 過(guò)久地坐在電腦屏幕前會(huì)影響他們的視力以及生理健康。
4. For those youngsters, typically those teenagers who are not rational enough to control themselves, the Internet should not be allowed to intrude into their daily life and they should stay away from net-bars. 但對(duì)于年輕人而言，特別是那些不夠理智、尚無(wú)能力控制自己的青少年而言，應(yīng)禁止網(wǎng)絡(luò)侵?jǐn)_他們的日常生活，他們應(yīng)該遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧。
