英語六級命題作文：談大學生自主創(chuàng)業(yè)
- 經典范文
- 結構剖析
- 參考譯文
- 亮點詞匯
- 重點句背誦與仿寫
On College Students' Establishing Their Own Business
Recently the government has issued some preferential policies to encourage college students to establish their own business. One main part of the reason is that the current economical crisis breaks the normal economical activities. The other main reason is that the job supply can not meet the need of more and more students.
Due to these reasons, the government encourages students to establish their own business. On the one hand, it can alleviate the employment pressure. On the other hand, it can shape students' capability of independence and creativity. However, it also brings about problems. For one thing, the students are lack of life experience, not to mention the working experience. Thus, the success rate is very low. For another, few of the students can establish their own business because of various internal and external conditions.
As far as I am concerned, the aim of the government is good, but the realistic conditions should be taken into consideration. Apart from the preferential policies, the government should take action to help the students establish their own business. (176 words)
結構剖析
文章分為三段
第一段指出主題是討論大學生自主創(chuàng)業(yè)，并列出了政策鼓勵大學生創(chuàng)業(yè)的兩個原因。
第二段寫出了政府鼓勵大學生創(chuàng)業(yè)對學生的影響以及帶來的兩個問題。
第三段是作者觀點的闡述，希望政府除了優(yōu)惠政策以外，可以采取實際行動幫助學生自主創(chuàng)業(yè)。
談大學生自主創(chuàng)業(yè)
最近政府已頒布了一些優(yōu)惠政策鼓勵大學生創(chuàng)業(yè)。一部分主要原因在于，當前經濟危機擾亂了正常的經濟活動。另一部分主要原因是，學生越來越多，工作崗位的供給已無法滿足他們的需求。
出于上述原因，政府鼓勵學生自主創(chuàng)業(yè)。一方面，這可以減輕政府的壓力。另一方面，也能塑造學生的自主和創(chuàng)新能力。然而，它也會帶來一些問題。其一，學生缺乏生活經驗，更不用談工作經驗。如此一來，成功的幾率十分渺茫。其二，因為種種內部與外部條件，很少有學生能夠成功創(chuàng)業(yè)。
在我看來，政府的初衷是好的，但也應考慮現(xiàn)實條件。除了優(yōu)惠政策外，政府應該采取更多行動來幫助學生創(chuàng)業(yè)。
preferential policies 優(yōu)惠政策
alleviate v. 減輕，緩解
employment pressure 就業(yè)壓力
bring about 造成，引起
not to mention 更不要說......
internal adj. 內部的，國內的
external adj. 外部的;外表的
as far as I am concerned 就我所知
take into consideration 把......考慮在內
take action 采取行動
1. Recently the government has issued some preferential policies to encourage college students to establish their own business. 最近政府已頒布了一些優(yōu)惠政策鼓勵大學生創(chuàng)業(yè)。
2. On the one hand, it can alleviate the employment pressure. On the other hand, it can shape students' capability of independence and creativity. 一方面，這可以減輕政府的壓力。另一方面，也能塑造學生的自主和創(chuàng)新能力。
3. The students are lack of life experience, not to mention the working experience. Thus, the success rate is very low.
學生缺乏生活經驗，更不用談工作經驗。如此一來，成功的幾率十分渺茫。
4. As far as I am concerned, the aim of the government is good, but the realistic conditions should be taken into consideration. 在我看來，政府的初衷是好的，但也應考慮現(xiàn)實條件。
