1. 題目涉及的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡單的描述,在描述的過程中將寫作引向文章的主題(這樣的描述可以自己控制,如果第一段落字?jǐn)?shù)單薄,可以適當(dāng)使描述具體化)。
2. 在第一步的基礎(chǔ)上給出觀點,觀點視文章主旨可以分為:個人觀點(包括方法、途徑),和多方觀點(觀點從正反兩方面或者一個方面的多個層次闡述;在交待觀點是需要有原因和支持)。
3.個人觀點總結(jié)點題(同意異表),簡要指出方法途徑,如果找不到具體的解決方法,則將話講得圓滑(如果正文中間觀點沒有必然沖突,則可以融合)。
A 1995.1 my view on the negative effects of some advertisements
社會上的廣告現(xiàn)象越來越多,很多的廣告對我們的社會有不良的影響-〉(廣告如何多:路邊大型廣告,報紙一半是廣告,電線桿上垃圾廣告,電視商業(yè)廣告頻繁。)
Today we live in a world of advertisement. Ads appear on broad side boards, take up much ofnewspaper coverage, slip their way onto walls and constantly interrupt TV programs. Howeverpervasive they are, (盡管他們四處充斥)they always produce a negative influence.
從觀點的多個層次描寫:1.白日搶劫——賣家通過彎曲夸大事實來欺騙消費者購買(化妝品);2.種下不良消費習(xí)慣或者價值觀(香煙);3.污染環(huán)境(牛皮癬和校園商業(yè)海報)。
To begin with, daylight robbery is made everyday occurrence (白日搶劫每天都在發(fā)生)as aresult of the negative effects of ads. Harmful ads exaggerate the functions and distort/ignore thefacts.(夸大功能,歪曲事實) Every means is tried to hook people into buying(為了誘導(dǎo)人們消費,不擇手段). Make-up promotion is a typical case in point.(化妝品促銷就是一個典型的例子)Furthermore, misleading ads plant in the mind (在腦海中植下)of consumers, especially youngpeople, a bad consumption habit or, even worse, corrupt values. For proof, look no further thancigarette selling. (香煙銷售就是一個典型的例子)Ads with the image of a smoking pop starbroadcast an irresistible message.(傳遞無法抗拒的信息) Last but not least, easily-printed postersand handouts have polluted our environment