2014年大學(xué)英語六級考試寫作專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練3

　　

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)目前大學(xué)生面臨就業(yè)難的問題

　　2)分析導(dǎo)致該問題的原因

　　3)大學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何應(yīng)對該問題

　　Employment Pressure Facing College Students ______________________________________________________________

　　【行文思路】

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)提出一個問題，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析該問題產(chǎn)生的原因，提綱第3的要求說明應(yīng)該如何解決該問題，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問題解決型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的問題;分析導(dǎo)致該問題的原因;從大學(xué)生的角度說明應(yīng)該如何應(yīng)對該問題。

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　Employment Pressure Facing College Students

　　[1]About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation. [1]But now, things are different. Today’s university students usually experience great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. They often complain that graduation means joblessness. [2]What is the cause of this phenomenon?

　　[3]Firstly, with the enrollment extension of universities, [4]the supply of university graduates exceeds social demand. This results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job. [3]Secondly, university students [5]tend to spend most of their time at school in studying academic subjects and lack relevant job experience. [3]Thirdly, some students don’t study hard during the college. After four years of university life, they haven’t gained the knowledge those fairly good jobs or positions require.

　　[6]Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should try our bests to change this situation. [3]Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and [7]put our heart into our studies. [3]What’s more, we can take part-time jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to [8]accumulate relevant practical experience. [3]Besides, when we apply for jobs after graduation, we should [9]attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary.

　　【作文點(diǎn)評】

　　[1]過去和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行對比。

　　[2]設(shè)問句引出原因，容易引起注意。

　　[3]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。

　　[4]“大學(xué)生供過于求”。

　　[5]“傾向，趨于”。

　　[6]“面對日趨激烈的競爭”，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。

　　[7]“用心學(xué)習(xí)”。

　　[8]“積累相關(guān)的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)”。

　　[9]“更加關(guān)注”。

　　佳句臨摹

　　1.佳句：Facing the increasingly fierce competition, university students should try their best to change this situation.

　　臨?。航?jīng)歷過艱苦，我們就會更懂得如何應(yīng)對危機(jī)。

　　2.佳句：They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting salary

　　臨?。汉茱@然，我們應(yīng)該更加關(guān)注一個人的能力，而不是他的學(xué)歷。

　　【KEY】

　　1. Having experienced hardships, we will know better how to survive crisis.

　　2. Obviously, we should attach more importance to one’s abilities than to his degree.