作文點(diǎn)評：本文主要是要討論自動取款機(jī)的利弊，寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)。
作文題目：論自動提款機(jī)
On the Use of the ATM
1. 現(xiàn)在人們使用自動取款機(jī)存取錢比較普遍
2. 使用自動取款機(jī)給人們帶來很多方便，但也有其弊端
3. 你的建議
ATM is not fresh to city residents. You can find at least one such machine in banks. And now, it is spreading in most rural areas of China. It is a common phenomenon for people to withdraw or deposit money through the ATM.
對于城市居民來說自動取款機(jī)并不新鮮。你可以在銀行找到至少一個(gè)這樣的機(jī)器?，F(xiàn)在，它已經(jīng)像中國大部分農(nóng)村地區(qū)蔓延。人們通過自動取款機(jī)取款或存錢是一種常見的現(xiàn)象。
ATM has helped both bank clerks and their customers greatly. For one thing, it partly frees the clerks from heavy work. For another thing, it provides customers with more speedy and around-the-clock service. But, ATM can be imperfect. First of all, you can’t withdraw as much money as you want. Five thousand Yuan is the maximum sum you can get daily. Secondly, there are risks for customers who withdraw money from ATM. They may suffer losses from theft, robbery or their own carelessness.
自動取款機(jī)幫助銀行職員和他們的客戶。一方面，它把工作人員從繁重的工作中解放了。另一方面，它為客戶提供更快捷的時(shí)鐘服務(wù)。但是，自動取款機(jī)是不完美的。首先，你不能收回你想要的錢。五千元是你每天可以得到的最高金額。第二，客戶從自動取款機(jī)上取款是有風(fēng)險(xiǎn)的。他們可能遭受的損失，盜竊，搶劫或自己的疏忽。
I think the following tips can avoid most troubles. First, withdraw a large sum of money through bank clerk service. Secondly, make sure the place where ATM was installed is safe enough. Thirdly, keep secret of password and remember to get your card back. Finally, get a companion when you use ATM at night.
我認(rèn)為以下的建議可以避免大部分的麻煩。首先，通過銀行業(yè)務(wù)員的服務(wù)取回一大筆錢。其次，確保安裝了自動取款機(jī)的地方是安全的。第三，輸入密碼是要注意遮蓋，并記得要取回自己的卡。最后，當(dāng)你在晚上使用自動取款機(jī)時(shí)，找個(gè)同伴。
詞匯學(xué)習(xí)：
fresh：英 [fre?] 美 [fr??]
adj.新鮮的; 新的; 淡水的; 無經(jīng)驗(yàn)的; adv.剛; 最新的; n.開始; 新生; 泛濫; 淡水流; 比較級：fresher 最高級：freshest 相關(guān)單詞： Fresh
[例句]I feel I is fresh air need.
我感到我是新鮮空氣需要。
city residents：市民;
rural areas of China ：中國農(nóng)村
withdraw or deposit money through the ATM ：通過自動取款機(jī)取錢或存錢
around-the-clock service：晝夜不停; 連續(xù)一整天; 全天候;晝夜不斷地
