2013年6月真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on theremark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people.”You can cite examples toillustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
樣卷：
①Nowadays it is easier for us to meet more and more people who even didn’t know us. Howcan we make friend with them as fast as possible. A smile may be is the shortest distancebetween two people.
In my point of view, someone’s first sight is important for others to recognize him. A personwho is always smiling would easy to be regarded as easy going and warm heart. Otherwise hemay be thought as curious. Second, smiling can cheer others up. In the daily life, we are alwaysexpecting someone smile to us when we feel disappointed. We will soon form a goodrelationship between us. Last but not the least, smiling can also calm yourself down when youmeet strangers or someone important. For example, when you are going to attend aninterview or make reported to your new boss, it is good for us to smile before your speeching.Others will think that you have prepared for it and are worth to trust.
Because of the three reasons I have told before, I deeply believe a smile is the best way for usto make friends and shorten the distance between others.
通篇看來(lái)，這篇作文做到了基本上做到了內(nèi)容切題，層次清楚。但是，文章的語(yǔ)言出現(xiàn)了較多的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫。因此，按照15分為滿分的分制，這篇文章得8分。
