Studying Abroad 留學(xué)海外
(1)有人認(rèn)為留學(xué)海外有許多好處。
(2)也有人認(rèn)為留學(xué)海外有許多弊端
(3)我的看法是…
四、六級作文類型：提綱式對比分析類議論文
審題構(gòu)思：
這是篇段首句續(xù)寫式作文。經(jīng)分析，文中所給的前兩段的段首句均可作為該段的主題句。第三段中，可根據(jù)所給的段首句暗示的寫作方向，得出結(jié)論，并以此為該段主題句。故第三段主題句為：One must consider both sides of the factors carefully before making up his mind。由此完成通篇構(gòu)思，其全文和各段框架具體構(gòu)思如下：
全文構(gòu)思
1.Attending school abroad has many advantages.
2.There are also some disadvantages.
3.One must consider both sides Of factors carefully.
段落構(gòu)思
第一段 Topic Sentence Attending school abroad has many advantages.
l. widen our vision
2. travel widely
3. improve the second foreign language
4. acquire updated knowledge
第二段 Topic Sentence There are also many disadvantages。
1. language barrier
2. misunderstanding
3. high tuition and cost of living
第三段 Topic Sentence One must consider both sides of the factors carefully.
1. good to study the subject weak in our country
2. should consider the disadvantages
精品詞匯
widen our visionhorizon 開闊視野
get acquainted with 了解
first-rate facilities 一流設(shè)備
language barrier 語言障礙
絕妙銜接
... In the first place, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …
But the most important thing... For all these...
However, … As a result, ... Besides, ... Furthermore, …
Therefore, ... On the whole, … But on the other hand, ...
良好開端
1. Attending school abroad has many advantages.
2. Attending school abroad has many positive aspects.
3. Studying abroad has many strong points.
4. Studying abroad has many favorable aspects.
成功收口
1. But on the other hand, one must not lose sight of the disadvantages.
2. But most important of all, one should not neglect the disadvantages of studying abroad.
3. Finally, one should always think carefully before making up one's mind.
4. Finally, everything depends on his personal financial status. If the advantages can outweigh the disadvantages, he should make up his mind to study abroad. Otherwise, it's advisable to study at home.
組段成篇
讀讀范文，看看文章的寫作模式——文章先分析留學(xué)海外的益處，隨后分析其弊端，最終得出結(jié)論。讀讀范文，看看文章的開篇、過渡與收口。把作文的思路看出來。把作文的思路讀出來。借你一雙慧眼，請把文題的奧秘看個真真切切，明明白白。
讀讀范文，想想看，如今有多少大學(xué)生、高中生甚至是中小學(xué)生都在拼命地想到海外留學(xué)，他們有的在海外功成名就，鵬程萬里;有的卻傾家蕩產(chǎn)，學(xué)業(yè)難成，貧困潦倒，陷入十分尷尬的境地，有苦難言。留學(xué)海外，有利也有弊。是弊大于利還是利大于弊一切因人而異。想想看，對此話題，你持何高見動動腦筋，想想看，作文的思路想出來。
讀讀范文，想想你的作文該怎樣寫讀了范文，就該你露一手了。看你能否寫出絕妙的語段，精彩的作文，勝過作者。切記：你今天的努力會換回你明天的成績;你今天的努力更會換回你明天的寫作能力。
范文：
Attending school abroad has many advantages. In the first place, by looking at our own country from the outside, we can best see the strong points of our nation, and therefore widen our vision and broaden our minds. Secondly, while studying in a foreign country, we can travel widely, visiting famous scenic spots and making friends with the local people. Thirdly, we can use the foreign language in our daily life so that our ability in the second language may be improved quickly. But the most important thing in attending a foreign university is to get acquainted with the latest knowledge in science and technology and make use of the first-rate facilities available. For all these advantages, it is really worthwhile to go abroad for further studies.
However, as everything has two sides, there are also some disadvantages in attending a foreign university. The most serious problem is the language barrier. Most of the students who are ready to go abroad do not have adequate proficiency in the language spoken there. As a result, on arriving there, they will find it difficult to understand what the instructors are saying. Besides, for lack of knowledge of the customs and way of life of the local people, they may constantly run into trouble in dealing with various situations. Therefore, misunderstandings often arise. Furthermore, the cost of living is much higher than that in our country, so most students have to find part-time jobs in order to help support themselves. Faced with these difficulties, many students find themselves unable to pay full attention to their studies and some students may even fail in their courses and learn little, even some have to return to their motherland.
Therefore, given an opportunity to attend a school abroad, one must consider both sides of the factors carefully before making up his mind. On the whole, it is a good thing to go and study abroad particularly when the subject is very weak or not available in our country. But on the other hand, one must not lose sight of the disadvantages.
考點分析：
本文屬典型的比較分析類議論文。其寫作特點是通過對同一種或兩種不同事物的正反兩面或優(yōu)劣、利弊等進行比較或?qū)Ρ确治?，得出結(jié)論。
對比/比較類議論文的寫作特點有三種：第一種是通過坤兩種不同事物比較分析，找出它們之間的共同點最后得出結(jié)論。
第二種是通過對兩種不同事物的對比分析，找出它們之間的差異，最后得出結(jié)論。
第三種是通過對同一事物正反兩面，優(yōu)劣、利弊進行比較分析，最后得出結(jié)論。本文恰屬最后一種。
范文賞析：
本文思路清晰，層次分明。語言流暢，論述充分，令人信服。文章用直入法開篇點題：留學(xué)海外，必有其益處。隨后作者用羅列法詳細(xì)論述其有利的一面：可以開拓視野，增加閱歷;可以提高外語水平，學(xué)到最新知識;還可充分利用國外一流的設(shè)備，發(fā)展自己的專業(yè)。接著作者用“However”承上啟下，完成段落過渡。作者旋即筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)開始議論留學(xué)海外的弊端：語言障礙、文化差異導(dǎo)致的誤解、學(xué)費和生活費昂貴等等。最終作者得出結(jié)論：在做出是否留學(xué)海外重大決策之前，務(wù)必三思而后行。
