Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of “Creating A Green Campus”. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1.建設(shè)綠色校園很重要
2.綠色校園不僅指綠色的環(huán)境……
3.為了建設(shè)綠色校園，我們應(yīng)該……
(一)審題立意
1.首先審題目以及提綱，考生很容易判斷出這是問題解決類作文。
2.該作文體現(xiàn)出一種較新的命題方式，首先在題材上，依然是我們所熟悉的校園類話題，同時(shí)兼顧社會(huì)的熱點(diǎn)：環(huán)保問題，這也與社會(huì)的大背景有關(guān)系，剛剛閉幕的哥本哈根世界氣候大會(huì)也同時(shí)關(guān)注環(huán)保減排這個(gè)主題，因此我們的作文也與社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)有很大的關(guān)系。分析題目Green “綠色”和Campus “校園”是本作文的關(guān)鍵詞?？忌鷳?yīng)該考慮綠色校園具體是什么含義。重點(diǎn)應(yīng)放在綠色校園的含義以及我們應(yīng)該采取的措施上?？季硪呀?jīng)列出了提綱，這是對“三段式”提綱類作文寫作結(jié)構(gòu)的考查。
(二)草擬提綱
段落一闡述問題段：①開門見山，綠色校園引發(fā)人們關(guān)注；②建立綠色校園對自己、他人及社會(huì)都有重要影響。
段落二說明原因段：①綠色校園具有兩層含義；②綠色，無污染；③人文精神、文明建設(shè)、人文關(guān)懷、和諧。
段落三解決方法段：①為了建設(shè)綠色校園，個(gè)人、學(xué)校、政府和社會(huì)各界應(yīng)該采取哪些措施；②對未來的展望。
根據(jù)以上構(gòu)思，寫作提綱如下：
Topic: Creating A Green Campus
Question: What’s a green campus and how to creat a green campus?
Outline:
Creating A Green Campus
I. Nowadays the topic of a green campus has aroused public attention.
1.It is of vital importance to the students
2.It has a profound impact on society
II. The idea of “a green campus”is beyond a green environment.
1. green environment preservation and protection
2. a civilized atmosphere for students’mental health
III. It is imperative for us to take effective measures to creat a green campus.
1.The law and regulations should be worked out
2.Enhanced the awareness of the students themselves
