「考研滿分作文」建議信：建議老師改進(jìn)教學(xué)

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2018年06月02日

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佳句拓展

Dear Professor Whitman,

Last week you asked us to give you feedback on your lectures. My thoughts are outlined below.

In general, I find your lectures very informative and inspiring. Indeed, I particularly like the way you demonstrate complex issues-using simple PPTs. This makes your lessons both interesting and memorable. However, I do feel that you should provide us with more handouts, as I often don't have time to take down all the important points. I would also like to be involved in more class discussions, as I find that this method could deepen my understanding of the subject.

I'd like to thank you for your attention given to us. I look forward to your next lecture.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

尊敬的惠特曼教授：

上周您讓我們對(duì)您的課進(jìn)行反饋。我的想法概括如下：

總的來(lái)說(shuō)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)您的課既可以增進(jìn)知識(shí)，又頗具啟發(fā)性。實(shí)際上，我特別喜歡您用簡(jiǎn)單的PPT來(lái)說(shuō)明復(fù)雜問(wèn)題的方式。這使得您的課既有趣又令人印象深刻。不過(guò)，因?yàn)槲医?jīng)常沒(méi)時(shí)間記下所有的要點(diǎn)，我確實(shí)覺(jué)得您應(yīng)該提供給我們更多的講義。我還想?yún)⑴c更多的課堂討論，因?yàn)槲野l(fā)現(xiàn)課堂討論可以加深我對(duì)這門(mén)課的理解。

我想感謝您對(duì)我們的關(guān)注。期待您下次上課。

您真誠(chéng)的，

李明

道長(zhǎng)點(diǎn)評(píng)

建議信的首段應(yīng)表明寫(xiě)作意圖，并簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己;要注意語(yǔ)氣，切勿啰唆。次段應(yīng)針對(duì)某情況提出具體建議或忠告，應(yīng)先肯定優(yōu)點(diǎn)，再寫(xiě)需要改進(jìn)之處，否則對(duì)方以為是投訴而非建議。末段應(yīng)總結(jié)建議，注意禮貌。寫(xiě)信時(shí)應(yīng)時(shí)刻考慮收信人的感受。

feedback 反饋

lecture 講課

thought 想法

outline 概述

informative 增進(jìn)知識(shí)的

inspiring 啟發(fā)靈感的

demonstrate 說(shuō)明

complex 復(fù)雜的

issue 問(wèn)題

memorable 容易記住的

handout 講義，材料

discussion 討論