雅思寫作高分語料庫教育類：游歷VS上大學(xué)

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2017年11月03日

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Nowadays，most people learn academic study in university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree? 現(xiàn)在，多數(shù)人在大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，但是，有人認為我們應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)更多的職業(yè)技能，是否同意?(2015年11月21日B卷考題) 雅思寫作高分語料庫教育類：游歷VS上大學(xué)圖1

【題目解析】本題為經(jīng)典教育話題改寫：可以理解為職業(yè)教育對比綜合教育，或者專才教育對比通才教育。

【相關(guān)話題】

【教育類】

In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. which is appropriate in today's world. 在一些國家，中學(xué)生會學(xué)習(xí)廣泛的課程，在一些國家，學(xué)生們會學(xué)習(xí)一些和未來擇業(yè)相關(guān)的課程，哪一種教育方式更加合適?

【謀篇布局】(讓步反駁)

首段：背景介紹+爭議焦點+作家立場

二段：讓步原題觀點的合理性

三段：反駁原題觀點的不合理

尾段：再次亮明觀點+總結(jié)理由

【思路拓展】

【職業(yè)教育的利好】

1. 人們的精力和時間有限，廣泛涉獵，難免蜻蜓點水。相反，集中精力學(xué)習(xí)一門課技能，可使人成為一個領(lǐng)域的專家。人生的奮斗的過程就是追求稀缺的過程，你要成為那個不可替代者。

2. 職業(yè)培訓(xùn)學(xué)校培養(yǎng)的學(xué)生，擇業(yè)更有競爭力，因為他們可以適合特殊企業(yè)的需求。

【大學(xué)教育的利好】

1. 通才教育幫助人實現(xiàn)全面發(fā)展，培養(yǎng)多元的興趣和才華，可以使受教育者適應(yīng)未來不同領(lǐng)域的工作，因此，可以減少單一職業(yè)選擇帶來的失業(yè)風(fēng)險。

2. 職業(yè)教育通常傳授的是以擇業(yè)為導(dǎo)向的知識，和就業(yè)相關(guān)聯(lián)的技能，僅是一種生存技能的培養(yǎng)，相反，通才教育不僅是傳授知識，還涉及到人的道德教育、性格培養(yǎng)、心靈成長，因此，專才教育更能體現(xiàn)完美教育的真諦。

【范文賞析】

【首段】背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 作家立場

Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without education, many of us believe is the victim of adversity. However，people’s views differ greatly as to whether or not specialist is superior to generalist. To voice my opinion, focusing on academic study in university enjoys more benefits.

【二段】學(xué)習(xí)職業(yè)技能的利好

Granted，those who advocate vocational training are, to some extent, never without their reasons. First，zeroing in on vocational skills can help learners secure well-paid jobs quickly, therefore, the family’s financial burden can be greatly reduced. From our life, we can find some examples to prove that job candidates from vocational training schools are very popular because what they have learnt are career-oriented and job-related. Also，Jack-of-all-trades is master of none. In comparison with studying a wide range of subjects，specializing in specific field can make one stand out in a crowd considering that one’s time and energy is limited

【三段】接受大學(xué)教育的利好：

What I want to rebut, however, is that we can never ignore the immense value of academic study at university. The most glaring merit is that those who receive university education have plenty of room for career development because they have access to manifold knowledge and techniques. In addition to tapping one’s unlimited potentials in various aspects and helping one realize overall development, experiencing university life can bring more wonderful memories of colorful campus life. Last, this can benefit a nation, all-round education can train more comprehensive talents for a country，which will inject new life into the further development of a nation.

【尾段】亮明立場

Overall，my stand is that compared with attending vocational training schools，receiving university education is more feasible and rational because it helps students realize comprehensive development and cultivate more personal talents. Likewise, our society need talents with a wealth of knowledge.

【全文點評】

本篇主題明確、行文順暢、邏輯清晰、文風(fēng)樸素、偶以亮點詞匯點綴，可為考生賞析之佳作。這篇原創(chuàng)范文只是雅思寫作之一種，文無定法，建議童鞋打造屬于自己的個性范文。2016年雅思有可能開始機考，很多童鞋報考學(xué)校的寫作分數(shù)也有要求提高的趨勢，唯有加強練筆，考試才能才高自現(xiàn)。

【經(jīng)典語料】

1. generalist n通才

2. specialist n專才

3. specialized education n專才教育

4. comprehensive education n通才教育

5. vocational training school n 職業(yè)培訓(xùn)學(xué)校

6. higher education = high education n 高等教育

7. acquire a range of subjects v 學(xué)習(xí)廣泛的課程

8. travel in the ocean of the knowledge v 暢游知識的海洋

9. avoid the possible risk of unemployment 避免潛在的失業(yè)的風(fēng)險

10. Knowledge is not a burden 藝多不要身

11. be well-prepared for the future career challenges v為未來事業(yè)的挑戰(zhàn)做好充分準備