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　　范文講評：旅游事業(yè)

　　「要求」

　　要求：旅游事業(yè)對我國具有舉足輕重的作用。請以Ways to Improve China’s Tourism為題為我國旅游事業(yè)的發(fā)展提幾點建議。(提示：擴大宣傳，改善旅游設施，提高服務質量……)

　　「范文」

　　Ways to Improve china’s tourism

　　Tourism is now becoming a major industry throughout the world. However，tourism in China is not as developed as it should be. If the following is done，China’s tourism will definitely be improved.

　　First，our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists. Second，facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip. Finally，the quality of service should be improved.

　　Don’t tell people their ideas are bad unless you’ve got a good one.

　　「評語」

　　本文第一段提出問題，第二段解決問題，“first”，“second”，“finally”等詞的使用，使整篇文章條理格外清晰。

　　范文講評：如何利用空余時間

　　「要求」

　　題目：你將參加校園英語講演比賽。現(xiàn)在需要寫出一份簡要的底稿，底稿應包含以下基本要點。

　　隨著工作時間的縮短，空余時間越來越多了。

　　如何利用空余時間。

　　利用空余時間的益處。

　　題目自擬。

　　「范文」

　　Use of Free Time

　　Some people may be so busy that they never have a spare moment，but it would be hard to find such people in contemporary times. Working hours are shorter and vacations longer，and there are more and more ways to spend the weekends. Aside from eating and sleeping，what do people do during the many hours when they are not at work or at school?