作文是各類英語(yǔ)考試中得分率最低的題型之一。同學(xué)們?cè)谡莆樟艘欢ǖ淖魑哪0?,和基本的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、句型用法之后,如果能在作文中創(chuàng)造一些詞匯和句型的閃光點(diǎn),必定會(huì)使你的作文如虎添翼!
高分作文標(biāo)志:
1:是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉;2、是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ);3、用詞是否多樣,準(zhǔn)確,形象,盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞; 4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重復(fù)詞; 5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。
下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng):
1. 適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng),這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2. 善于使用插入語(yǔ),比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語(yǔ)放在中間,一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語(yǔ)放在中間,一般放在動(dòng)詞,助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。
比如說(shuō): Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞,換形象,具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think,
people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)
下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I ( By Simmy )滬江
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替換 very
thrilling 替換 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth.
google 替換 search
an army of 替換 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型,用來(lái)描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular
Coincident with … 非常地道的句型,表達(dá)“與…一致”的意思,替換 With …