批準計劃書信件中應該提到該計劃的內容以及實施的時間。
1.I have carefully reviewed your proposal for new……我已經仔細審查了你關于新……的計劃。
2.I concur with your recommendations.我完全同意你的建議。
3.I have forwarded your proposal with my endorsement to the Head ofMarketing.我已經將你們的計劃以及我的背書一起轉交給市場營銷部經理了。
4.I enjoyed your presentation on the proposed change in our staff canteen.
我很喜歡你那個關于我們的員工餐廳改造的提案。
5.I will tell the board that I can think of no reason for not adopting itimmediately.我會告訴董事會我的意見,即我們應該馬上采用這一計劃。
6.As you requested, I have reviewed the proposal for an upgrade incomputers and I am in total agreement with its recommendation that the company purchase the latest models.正如你所要求的那樣,我已經審閱了關于電腦升級的計劃書,我完全贊成該計劃書的提議,公司應該購買最新型號的電腦。
7.I have read and analyzed your proposal to provide……to employees ofShanghai Corporation.我已經閱讀并分析了你關于向上海公司員工提供……的計劃。
8.I was impressed by your statistics on the higher retention rates for femaleexecutives in companies with such facilities.你的統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)顯示,在具有此種設施的公司中,女性高管有較高的留任率。這些數(shù)據(jù)給我留下了深刻印象。
9.I have recommended to the Board of Directors that they approve yourproposal.你的計劃須經董事會批準,我已經向他們推薦過了。
10.Wonderful news!Your proposal has been accepted.好消息!你的建議已經通過了。
Subject:Advertising proposal
Dear Mr. Wu,
The board of directors has approved your advertising proposal. They are enthusiastic about the youthful slant your advertising assumes and feel it will boost sales of our new vitamin range.Of course, we need to discuss the details of the project further.My secretary, Amy, will call to schedule a time when we can meet.
Once again, thank you very much and I look forward to meeting you.
Best regards,
Ken Ham
親愛的吳先生:
董事會已經批準了你的廣告策劃。他們對于你在廣告中所表現(xiàn)出的年輕化的傾向非常感興趣。他們認為這樣的廣告將會刺激我們的新品維生素的銷售。當然,我們需要進一步探討一下這個方案的細節(jié)。我的秘書艾米將會給你打電話安排我們會面的時間。
再次深表感謝,期待著與你會面。
謹致問候
肯·漢姆